Revision Plan

  • I will add another research question at the beginning so that the audience will know that I will also explore the different writing styles of the experts from two different fields.
  • I will add some descriptions of how I will explore the different writing styles in the "method" to inform the audience at the beginning.
  • I will add an analysis section for the interview I conducted so the audience will have a better understanding of my interview.
  • I will talk more about what I obtain from comparing the different writing styles and their meaning in terms of this topic at the conclusion section.